Magazine advert planning

I made some preliminary sketches for my magazine advert.

I originally designed to have the advert being the album cover I made but when I made it it didn't appear to me like a magazine advert.

So I then made an ad using the sketch i drew on the bottom right of the image shown at the top of the page.

I changed from my original plan slighly by giving the album a future release date and adding the pre order now part.

I then asked a fellow class mate and my course tutor for their opinion and they said that the 'Avalible in all good stores' part was to cliche so I decided to remove it and add some reviews from different newspapers and magazines and it is more effective.